Tuesday, February 17, 2009

sounds like mahi ve

man to karta hai bohot kuch likhu
v day aya aur gaya si , kaiyon ne kai kuch likha
man mera bhi kare
par pata na ki likhu


ajkal man happy happy lagda ve
results hai door , kya ye karan ve ?
na punjabi na poetry mennu aati ve
na jane fir bhi kyu man kare
ki bohot kuch likhu re .
at

17 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2009 at 9:10 AM

    Aww...
    bahut kuch kehne ko dil chahta hey
    bus ye kehdu ki its so cute and pyaara re! :)

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  2. peterFebruary 18, 2009 at 2:09 AM

    blank phase huh ?
    happens ..waise which language is that ?
    a bad punjabi version :P LOL

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  3. TaraFebruary 18, 2009 at 4:44 AM

    Yeh kya tha re
    Par jo bhi tha
    vadda changa tha
    bilkul saddi Amu ki tarah! :)

    Sorry...very bad Punjabi! But whatever this was, was very cute and sweet. :)

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  4. A Benevolent Sultan for LifeFebruary 18, 2009 at 4:56 AM

    Hit Hit :D , fodu :D :D :D

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  5. I'll try 2 be truthfulFebruary 18, 2009 at 7:13 AM

    @sree
    ;)

    @peter

    seriously :D

    @tara
    yaar aap to...... :)


    @tyro
    hahhaahaa

    pagalpanti bhi zaroori hai .
    jinni bhi sadi post likhi ho tere liye hit hit hai :D

    tera post kab aaegaa ??
    "aajkal pariyaan milti hai ....."

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2009 at 9:05 AM

    sounds like some dadaji telling to his garandchildren...sweet !

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2009 at 9:06 AM

    ohh chii...wat spelling i wrote of grand children !

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  8. ResurgenceFebruary 18, 2009 at 3:22 PM

    he he ... achcha hai... pata nahi kya hai... par achcha hai.... :)... to tu ab lyricist bhi ho gayi hai... bhagwaan bachaye logon ko.. :)

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  9. KeshiFebruary 19, 2009 at 5:31 PM

    sweetie I dun u'stand this :( awww...

    Keshi.

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  10. jamesFebruary 20, 2009 at 4:27 AM

    loved it. because it has got an honest feel about it. :)

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  11. I'll try 2 be truthfulFebruary 20, 2009 at 7:01 AM

    @saheli
    ya it should've been grenade children.


    @resurgence
    rest assured I"ll write something better than 'kallu mama'

    @keshi
    dont worry , its not meant to .


    @james
    am still thinking about your poem :)

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  12. Anil SawanFebruary 22, 2009 at 7:59 AM

    10 precious lines from a person in writer's block :P impressive.. if u cud write so gud wen u dnt hav anything to wrote, i wonder how gud wud u write when u have loadz to write :)

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  13. Matangi MawleyFebruary 22, 2009 at 10:46 AM

    ah! bahut kuchch kehne ko jee chahe.. phir bhi kuchch na keh paaye.. :) sounded truthful!! genuine.. was cute.. good work..

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  14. NidzFebruary 22, 2009 at 9:03 PM

    tu kuch bhi likh dal ve, hum loh padhlenge :)

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  15. I'll try 2 be truthfulFebruary 23, 2009 at 10:32 PM

    @sawan , matangi and nidhi

    u guys are too sweet :)

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  16. workhardMarch 30, 2009 at 10:12 AM

    Confusing poem....Good try though...

    Haiku poetry

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