Saturday, May 15, 2010

If these were only thoughts
I wouldn't have written them.


If there was desideratum
I would have made it.

If there were memories
I would have known them.

If there was sadness
I would have felt it.

And If there was love
I would have known it.
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10 comments:

  1. Matangi MawleyMay 15, 2010 at 11:21 PM

    :) sweet.. very good!

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  2. NidzMay 17, 2010 at 5:19 AM

    nce one...

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  3. MadsMay 21, 2010 at 12:19 PM

    Interesting one!

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  4. peterMay 23, 2010 at 11:13 AM

    If it was a comment I would have commented it :P

    liked it a lot :D

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  5. NidzMay 24, 2010 at 1:33 PM

    Lost in thoughts.. Tired to fighting own's mind wit too many questions.

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  6. vanilla skyMay 24, 2010 at 7:37 PM

    short and sweet !

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  7. I'll try 2 be truthfulMay 26, 2010 at 12:10 AM

    @all
    Thankyou :)

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  8. ResurgenceMay 26, 2010 at 7:42 AM

    If I would have grasped it, I would have commented earlier on it... :) And acknowledging that I still do not completely understand the zeast of this poem (I was always bad in poems) what was that 'it'?

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  9. A Benevolent Sultan for LifeMay 26, 2010 at 5:44 PM

    See AMU, Shanu is honest, :).

    If it was only a pagal girl's thoughts(stupid blog)
    I would, ok give it a thought to read it (may be) :)


    If there was desideratum
    I would wonder is that some word, Barney Strintson made up.

    If there were memories
    I would be only girls, yes the pretty ones.

    If there was sadness
    No I am not adopted.

    And If there was love ( desi or firnang ) ?
    Still I never turn vegetarian.

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  10. I'll try 2 be truthfulJune 1, 2010 at 5:59 AM

    @Resurgence and Tyro

    Yeah I like Rahul S. he's honest.
    As for the gist of the poem, it doesn't matter.

    coz If it did
    I could kick someone.

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