Saturday, May 15, 2010

If these were only thoughts
I wouldn't have written them.


If there was desideratum
I would have made it.

If there were memories
I would have known them.

If there was sadness
I would have felt it.

And If there was love
I would have known it.

10 comments:

Matangi Mawley said...

:) sweet.. very good!

Nidz said...

nce one...

Mads said...

Interesting one!

peter said...

If it was a comment I would have commented it :P

liked it a lot :D

Nidz said...

Lost in thoughts.. Tired to fighting own's mind wit too many questions.

vanilla sky said...

short and sweet !

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

@all
Thankyou :)

Resurgence said...

If I would have grasped it, I would have commented earlier on it... :) And acknowledging that I still do not completely understand the zeast of this poem (I was always bad in poems) what was that 'it'?

A Benevolent Sultan for Life said...

See AMU, Shanu is honest, :).

If it was only a pagal girl's thoughts(stupid blog)
I would, ok give it a thought to read it (may be) :)


If there was desideratum
I would wonder is that some word, Barney Strintson made up.

If there were memories
I would be only girls, yes the pretty ones.

If there was sadness
No I am not adopted.

And If there was love ( desi or firnang ) ?
Still I never turn vegetarian.

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

@Resurgence and Tyro

Yeah I like Rahul S. he's honest.
As for the gist of the poem, it doesn't matter.

coz If it did
I could kick someone.