Tuesday, February 17, 2009

sounds like mahi ve

man to karta hai bohot kuch likhu
v day aya aur gaya si , kaiyon ne kai kuch likha
man mera bhi kare
par pata na ki likhu


ajkal man happy happy lagda ve
results hai door , kya ye karan ve ?
na punjabi na poetry mennu aati ve
na jane fir bhi kyu man kare
ki bohot kuch likhu re .

16 comments:

Sree said...

Aww...
bahut kuch kehne ko dil chahta hey
bus ye kehdu ki its so cute and pyaara re! :)

peter said...

blank phase huh ?
happens ..waise which language is that ?
a bad punjabi version :P LOL

Tara said...

Yeh kya tha re
Par jo bhi tha
vadda changa tha
bilkul saddi Amu ki tarah! :)

Sorry...very bad Punjabi! But whatever this was, was very cute and sweet. :)

Sougata said...

Hit Hit :D , fodu :D :D :D

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

@sree
;)

@peter

seriously :D

@tara
yaar aap to...... :)


@tyro
hahhaahaa

pagalpanti bhi zaroori hai .
jinni bhi sadi post likhi ho tere liye hit hit hai :D

tera post kab aaegaa ??
"aajkal pariyaan milti hai ....."

vanilla sky said...

sounds like some dadaji telling to his garandchildren...sweet !

vanilla sky said...

ohh chii...wat spelling i wrote of grand children !

Resurgence said...

he he ... achcha hai... pata nahi kya hai... par achcha hai.... :)... to tu ab lyricist bhi ho gayi hai... bhagwaan bachaye logon ko.. :)

Keshi said...

sweetie I dun u'stand this :( awww...

Keshi.

james said...

loved it. because it has got an honest feel about it. :)

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

@saheli
ya it should've been grenade children.


@resurgence
rest assured I"ll write something better than 'kallu mama'

@keshi
dont worry , its not meant to .


@james
am still thinking about your poem :)

sawan said...

10 precious lines from a person in writer's block :P impressive.. if u cud write so gud wen u dnt hav anything to wrote, i wonder how gud wud u write when u have loadz to write :)

Matangi Mawley said...

ah! bahut kuchch kehne ko jee chahe.. phir bhi kuchch na keh paaye.. :) sounded truthful!! genuine.. was cute.. good work..

Nidhi said...

tu kuch bhi likh dal ve, hum loh padhlenge :)

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

@sawan , matangi and nidhi

u guys are too sweet :)

workhard said...

Confusing poem....Good try though...

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