man to karta hai bohot kuch likhu
v day aya aur gaya si , kaiyon ne kai kuch likha
man mera bhi kare
par pata na ki likhu
ajkal man happy happy lagda ve
results hai door , kya ye karan ve ?
na punjabi na poetry mennu aati ve
na jane fir bhi kyu man kare
ki bohot kuch likhu re .
17 comments:
Aww...
bahut kuch kehne ko dil chahta hey
bus ye kehdu ki its so cute and pyaara re! :)
blank phase huh ?
happens ..waise which language is that ?
a bad punjabi version :P LOL
Yeh kya tha re
Par jo bhi tha
vadda changa tha
bilkul saddi Amu ki tarah! :)
Sorry...very bad Punjabi! But whatever this was, was very cute and sweet. :)
Hit Hit :D , fodu :D :D :D
@sree
;)
@peter
seriously :D
@tara
yaar aap to...... :)
@tyro
hahhaahaa
pagalpanti bhi zaroori hai .
jinni bhi sadi post likhi ho tere liye hit hit hai :D
tera post kab aaegaa ??
"aajkal pariyaan milti hai ....."
sounds like some dadaji telling to his garandchildren...sweet !
ohh chii...wat spelling i wrote of grand children !
he he ... achcha hai... pata nahi kya hai... par achcha hai.... :)... to tu ab lyricist bhi ho gayi hai... bhagwaan bachaye logon ko.. :)
sweetie I dun u'stand this :( awww...
Keshi.
loved it. because it has got an honest feel about it. :)
@saheli
ya it should've been grenade children.
@resurgence
rest assured I"ll write something better than 'kallu mama'
@keshi
dont worry , its not meant to .
@james
am still thinking about your poem :)
10 precious lines from a person in writer's block :P impressive.. if u cud write so gud wen u dnt hav anything to wrote, i wonder how gud wud u write when u have loadz to write :)
ah! bahut kuchch kehne ko jee chahe.. phir bhi kuchch na keh paaye.. :) sounded truthful!! genuine.. was cute.. good work..
tu kuch bhi likh dal ve, hum loh padhlenge :)
@sawan , matangi and nidhi
u guys are too sweet :)
Confusing poem....Good try though...
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